Some slight modifications from version 1, and some ‘roughing up’ as the band requested. My personal view is that I like the way the whitespace works to the left of the design seeing as there is a lot happening on the right. It creates a nice balance. Personally, I think the design would work better with less of the ‘roughing up’ - I preferred the cleaner look. Logo still needs work and is only a temporary design for now. I will spend more time on the logo for the next draft. Until then…
The band’s view re the previous design:
“Yeah like the layout looks good man itÂ’s a bit to clean can you rough it up a bit as for the logo it looks good but can you make it a little less hatebreed perhaps distress the letters a bit more…”